03 October 2009

Entry 5 - Goodbye Ramadhan, I will still miss you because I still remember you

GoodBye Ramadan...

When say only Ramadan, sure all people Islam know that. Same with me, thankful to God because give me time to continue my life. Today I want to tell about Ramadan this year. This year I received fast at Kuala Lumpur there are place my study. Very-very bored because not have person to care me. Post midnight meal lonely, break fast lonely, all lonely. This is because I'm study at Kuala Lumpur and my family at Kuantan. Ramadan to me for this year is a very bad but I'm very happy because I have friend at class. They give time to me, so I don't feel bored. However, I'm thank to God give feel happy when time Hari Raya Aidil Fitri. I think that all.

02 October 2009

Entry 4 - Thesis Statement



Thesis Statement

How to write a good thesis statement?
If to make a good thesis statement in essay, must be have topic. Beside that, in the essay have a controlling ideas too. This is a basic stand and author takes and have a major points that he wishes to make about his subject. Opinion that he expresses are too can make a good thesis statement. My lecturer say, in my thesis statement must be have to state the subject clearly and specifically. Beside that, must take a stand or attitude about the subject. And the lastly she said, proud the direction by indicating, implicity or explicity.

Examples of a good thesis statement...
1. The scenery in the Swiss Alps is absolutely amazing.
2. When she realized what a fool she'd made of herself, she felt terribly emberrassed.
3. Don't go to the restaurant-the food is revolting.
4. The film was so moving that I cried at the end.
5. Looking after chilldren all day long is very tiring. By the evening, I'm completely exhausted.